Below are the seven fabulous winners, chosen at random from the comments on the contest post:
Synopsis/plot arc critique:
- Erin_Schultz
- Roza M
- Chris Campillo
- romancecritique
- Unknown (posted October 26, 2012 4:44 PM)
- Netbug
- Melissa Gorzelanczyk
Now, as a recap, here is a list of all the wonderful advice from the posts - read, soak in, enjoy:
Don't
be bat sh@# crazy. So many people get so obsessed
with getting every perfect they over think and obsess over small details. Take
a deep breath, do your best, and don't over-analyse.
Keep
Writing! Don't get so hung up on submitting or
promoting or whatever that you forget the key element of being a writer. It's
also how you improve your craft and become a better writer. You can take all
the writing classes in the world but if you aren't writing after class, then
what's the point? A lot of people say "Write every day," but that's
not always practical given life's demands. What I think works better is to
"Write Regularly," whatever that means to you and your schedule. Just
don't stop. Keep writing!
It
only takes one "yes." It's easy to get
down and depressed when the flurry of rejections start coming in, but you can't
give up. Is there validity in the rejections? Are there suggestions on
improvement? If so, great! Take it! If not, move on. Your writing, as is your
book, is not meant for everyone and not everyone will love it. But find that
ONE agent (b/c you only have one in the end anyways) and you're golden.
Do
Not Rush Your Work - into the envelop or under the
send Key. The one thing I've witnessed (and been guilty of) is hurrying the WIP
to be a done deal. It's not worth it. A Pennsylvania Dutch saying (likely from
other cultures, too) is: The Hurrieder I Go, The Behinder I Get (atrocious
spelling mine, I think). Take the time to read your work again, double check
the spelling, get another opinion on the point that puzzles you.
Take
criticism and grow from it. Taking everything as a
failure won't help and ignoring every constructive word will get you nowhere.
Have
more than one project going at a time. That way, no
matter when you get stuck or writer's block kicks in, you always have something
to work on.
Get
your work in front of several pairs of eyes. Beta
readers can give you great feedback, and the feedback given from readers who do
not also write is often different, yet still just as beneficial, as that given
from other writers. Fresh eyes can find typos and misspelled words you've
missed. And they can tell you where a story is confusing for someone who
doesn't have the ins and outs of the character's entire life in their head.
Don't
be afraid to write crap. First drafts are meant to
be awful. They're also not meant to be sent out into the world. Write
everything you want to write in your first draft, let it ramble and sprawl and
just spill out in a putrid, stinking mess of of story and character. It can all
be tidied up and made pretty and perfumed in revisions. LOTS of revisions.
Less
is more. Get rid of that stuff that doesn't advance
the plot. Get rid of extraneous words. Your book is like an un-sculpted piece
of marble and you've got trim away the excess to make it into a work of art.
Don't
compare your journey to anyone else. Hard to do,
especially with the internet, but so important!
Just
because you get a brilliant idea for a new manuscript while in the middle of
writing chapter 5 does not mean your current manuscript is terrible and you
should abandon it for your Shiny New Idea.
Keep
writing. Never give up, never surrender. If you're
faced with rejection after rejection, don't let it get you down and don't give
up. The more you write the more you'll improve and the better your chances to
snag that one agent or one editor. Your day will come.
Write for the joy of writing. Don't worry about getting published, do it because you love it. Just like if you run - don't run to win your first race - run for the pleasure of running...oh, and maybe to get in shape ;D - kinda like writing to be a better writer.
Write for the joy of writing. Don't worry about getting published, do it because you love it. Just like if you run - don't run to win your first race - run for the pleasure of running...oh, and maybe to get in shape ;D - kinda like writing to be a better writer.
Listen
to the advice given. You might not agree, but
listen first before you judge.
Be
authentic. If you're really not a gritty urban
fantasy person, don't try writing it, even if it's supposed to be the next big
thing. If you hate Twitter, then don't do it. Explore what is comfortable for
you and be yourself. You'll find your voice and genre more quickly, and have
more fun.
Believe
in yourself and your work. You're not born with the
talent to write, it's learned. Never stop learning.
Good
ideas will stick around. They don't vanish forever
if you can't write them down right away. They'll check in on you during your
morning walk or while you're treading dirty dishes.
Try
and find your "voice" - which, I know, is
hard. But necessary.
Keep reading and writing; writing and reading. Because that's what we love doing.
Keep reading and writing; writing and reading. Because that's what we love doing.
Believe
you will succeed. Self-delusion is more productive
than self-doubt.
Writing
can be a lonely business, so find other writer friends for support. Meet them for coffee or chat with them online, whatever works best.
They're the friends you can call or email when you need sympathy after a
rejection or when you want to celebrate after a full request or a contest win.
Remember
why you started writing in the first place. It's
easy to get caught up in revisions, critique groups, agent submissions,
contests, etc. and lose sight of your love for writing a great story. Hey,
writing is supposed to be enjoyable! Remember?
Don't
discount what you can learn from other media.
Particularly for YA & MG novels, screenplays and TV scripts have tons to
teach. Screenplay writing book, Save the Cat! is among the most useful overall
writing books out there.
"Join
the SCBWI." A friend gave me this advice and
I'm so glad I listened.
When
you get writer's block, walk away. Get a glass of
wine, a latte, take a walk, run an errand, take a nap. Your brain will work on
your writing problem in spite of you.
Keep
moving forward- learning, writing, editing,
promoting, networking. Never stand still long enough to sink.
Never
give up on an idea you once loved just because you've hit a rough patch at some point in the narrative. Even if it's difficult to figure
out where you went wrong or how to continue on, it can a lot of times be worth
the effort!
Think
outside the box. Don't be afraid to take risks,
challenge conventions or make daring writing attempts. Whether they fail or
suceeed doesn't matter. It will grow and develop your writing. The more you
question and are curious, the more you learn.
Writers
should follow a 100 to 1 rule: Read 100 novels for every one they write, read
100 short stories for every one they write, and read 100 query letters for
every one they write.
"Most
of the sentences you make will need to be killed. The rest will need to be
fixed. This will be true for a long time."
-Verlyn Klinkenborg in Several Short Sentences About Writing.
"Be
a writer, not an author." - Jon Bard. The
long road to publishing (for me) can make me lose some of my optimism and also
make me feel like I have to rush before I "miss out" on the success.
When I remember how much joy writing gives me, it calms me and that hope and
optimism that is almost always at my fingertips return.
Take
your time. Don't do it for the money, do it for the
love of writing. Then you will be happy.
Keep
a paper and pen outside the shower curtain- it's where the best ideas inevitably
hit.
BE
PATIENT. Really, patience is a virtue. Don't rush
sending query letters to every agent, don't status check a request after only a
couple weeks (this coming from me who has been waiting close to 7 months on a
response. It's a long story). I've been in the 'Query Wars'for almost 3 years,
but I've also been writing more books, and reading a LOT. That helps me when it
seems like things are taking FOREVER to happen :)
Don't
be afraid to listen to your gut. If a book deal or
agent offer doesn't "feel right", it probably isn't. Move
on...another door WILL open. Every time my career has advanced, it's because
I've bravely listened to my intuition instead of staying with what's
"safe".
Write
anywhere at any time. Tiny, simple notebooks that
you can fit in your pocket are perfect. And, as John Green once said, all
writing is rewriting.
Picture
Book writers need to "Think Visually".
Give
yourself permission to write a sucky first draft.
Then rewrite. And edit. And revise. And rewrite again...
You can revise the same manuscript for twenty years and never feel like you've fixed everything. There will always be a word here or a phrase there that can be altered and improved. There comes a time when you have to be willing to let your words go and have the courage to start submitting it to editors/agents, or you'll be an aspiring author for the rest of your life!
You can revise the same manuscript for twenty years and never feel like you've fixed everything. There will always be a word here or a phrase there that can be altered and improved. There comes a time when you have to be willing to let your words go and have the courage to start submitting it to editors/agents, or you'll be an aspiring author for the rest of your life!
GO
TO CONFERENCES! If you can possibly afford it, go,
hang out in the bar before during and after, and meet agents as casual buds. It
makes SO much difference! Also, pay attention to them during panels and dinners
and lunches and such. I'm so much less stressed submitting to them after seeing
one I'd considered up close and personal. Seeing her in person convinced me I
had no desire to be agented by her. If I get another rejection, I can just
picture that particular agent and tell myself that this one also wasn't right
because they don't GET me.
The
polishing and editing never ends. At one point you
just have to look at your manuscript and be confident that it's ready to go out
into the world. When it does, you need to know that this is THE BEST manuscript
ever (at that moment) because every writer's last book is always the best book
s/he ever wrote.
Don't
believe every piece of advice you hear on the internet. There are a lot of self-entitled people and often can give
ill-advice and make a writer question their own work. If you question it, find
a professional to help (there are so many GREAT mentoring writers out there LOOKING
to help). This is particularly critical for anyone who writes literary fiction.
Forget
about the traditional publishing industry and do it myself. I spent three years trying to break in and was continually
rejected. I finally self-published my books instead and I am suddenly making
enough to quit my day job and write full-time. Despite years of rejections on
three different books, despite working with two different literary agents at a
major agency, despite following all the sage writers' advice who supposedly
knew what they were talking about, despite doing everything "the right
way," publishers had no interest in me. But I've known all along that I
write a killer book, and that readers will be interested.
Respect
critique from all levels of writers and readers.
Yes, there is advice only a talented writer can offer, but if you sneer at the
every-day reader you miss a unique perspective.
Be
disciplined. Love what you do, but be diligent in
pursuing it. Study it, practice it, talk about it, but most of all, do it. And
don't stop doing it, even when you don't want to do it anymore. It's pushing
past your comfort zone and swimming in the discomfort of not knowing that leads
to your next breakthrough. You get better by not giving up.
When
an agent is kind enough to e-mail you feedback, listen to it. Don't let your anger from being rejected cloud an important
opinion. Take a week, then go back to your novel and consider revising.
Writing is never finished, even if it gets published. It's a living piece of art, forever changing. You have to accept that if you want to succeed in getting published.
Writing is never finished, even if it gets published. It's a living piece of art, forever changing. You have to accept that if you want to succeed in getting published.
Be
humble. Plain and simple. We never stop learning,
as writers or in life. Also, NO one has ALL the answers. So take naysayers with
a grain of salt ;)
Ray Bradbury had the best advice: "You must stay drunk on writing so
reality cannot destroy you."
Always
have something to work on, to look forward to, to think about--other than the manuscript or query you just sent out--while you're
waiting for feedback and answers. Waiting has a funny way of breeding
doubt--and you want to squash that monster!
Agents
read subjectively. One rejection does not mean your
writing is bad. It could just mean its not right. And at the end of the day, if
all you have is a lot of rejections, there are always more ideas hovering in
your mind, waiting to be written. Above all: "Explore the reason that
compels you to write; test whether it stretches its roots into the deepest part
of your heart, admit to yourself whether you would have to die if the
opportunity to write were withheld from you." -Rainer Maria Rilke
Be
persistent. Keep writing. Keep revising. Keep
submitting. Taste is subjective, but if you write great stories, someone will
want them.
Advice from Kurt Vonnegut: "Write to please just one person. If
you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get
pneumonia.”
You
can't wait for inspiration. You have to just kind
of keep going at it and hope it'll come. Paraphrased, but good tip from
Pullitzer winner Jeffrey Eugenides.
Write
the story only YOU can write :) It's helped me more
than I ever thought it would!
Ok. I'll do it!
ReplyDeleteThis is all great advice! I'm sorry that travelling kept me from adding to your list, but I'm keeping this link bookmarked.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for all the wonderful advice!
ReplyDeleteCongrats to the other winners! This is all really awesome advice!
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